doomsday ch 2 |
Fantasy
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Death
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Male / Females
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Male/Teen Female
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Murder
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Older Male / Female
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Romance
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Torture
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Violence
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Virginity
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Introduction: this is a raw version of my story i would have liked to just post an edited one but my editor is unavabile at the moment but i know many people have asked for this chapter soon so please remember this is still a work in progress and comment in a producetive manner. P.S. if there are any editors that would like to help me id take all the help i can get, im not, nor ever have been a good writer so if you think you could help improve this story with editing that still keeps to the focus of the story its self then please feel free to pm me here. thank you for reading and i hope you enjoy it. |