Ronnie 2 (Mall) |
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Introduction: Constructive feedback, please. I didn't meant to imply that our main character raped Ronnie (after all she kissed him and was very willing in all the endeavors), but when I re-write I will use different words to convey what I was thinking -- that Ronnie would have some ... hesitation ... before letting a stranger take her virginity. Please enjoy the following story. |