Meeting Ebima |
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Introduction: My second story! I'm realy excited about this one, I actually started writing it before I wrote Desmond and Lyle, but got a HUGE case of writer's block. I read your comments for the first story, and I think I fixed the problems with the paragraphs and details. If you like it, tell me! If you hate it, tell me! I want to know what you my readers want to see in stories, I want to know I'm doing all that I can to keep you guys enthralled :) So again, whether or not you liked it, please leave some comments and let me know. Thanks, guys! |