Betrayed pt. 1 |
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Introduction: This is my first story, wrote it a while back but wasn't sure if I wanted to post it. Any constructive feedback is welcome. Specifically, I really want to know if I was not detailed enough with the sex or if the story was just bland and nothing new. I kind of want to follow this up with a prequel that goes in depth with her story. The title is pretty random and has no relativity for this chapter. So for those looking for a betrayal kind of theme you’re not going to find it in this story, or at least not until pt.2 if I decide to write one. |