Anna's Last Year at School_(2) |
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Introduction: I just could not get this first story right and almost gave up. I put it to one side and worked on the second and third stories, which I then published, before coming back to this one. It then flowed much better by including some snippets deleted from the ‘later’ stories. I am trying to improve my writing, so please include constructive comments particularly if you feel you need to leave a negative rating. I won’t be offended and I will use your thoughts to write better stories. |